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Tethered—— Ami serial
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amother
Lightcyan


 

Post Sun, Dec 29 2024, 3:13 pm
amother OP wrote:
I’m an avid reader and sometimes authors like to confuse ppl.


Haven't read this yet but so many of the serials are downright confusingly written and just bad literature, every sentence is an innuendo and every paragraph switches viewpoints or tense.
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amother
  Cadetblue


 

Post Sun, Dec 29 2024, 3:23 pm
amother Lightcyan wrote:
Haven't read this yet but so many of the serials are downright confusingly written and just bad literature, every sentence is an innuendo and every paragraph switches viewpoints or tense.


I didn't find this one confusing, tho I'm presuming we'll get more info in the next installments.
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amother
Mintgreen


 

Post Sun, Dec 29 2024, 4:32 pm
From what I see the young gerusha is meeting with two friends, one Kallah, one still looking. The gerusha is imagining cozy evenings with friends in her marital apartment. It ends with dad giving her a little ice bath about affording the apartment. I imagine she is going to learn the hard way…
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amother
Cantaloupe  


 

Post Sat, Jan 04 2025, 6:11 pm
Think it so poorly written.
Like it seems as if a high school girl wrote it

What the heck is wrong with Ami to take such poor writing ?
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amother
  OP  


 

Post Sat, Jan 04 2025, 6:13 pm
amother Cantaloupe wrote:
Think it so poorly written.
Like it seems as if a high school girl wrote it

What the heck is wrong with Ami to take such poor writing ?


Ikr.
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amother
Violet


 

Post Sat, Jan 04 2025, 6:22 pm
Not impressed either though I'm enjoying the simplicity in a way.
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amother
  Cantaloupe


 

Post Sat, Jan 04 2025, 6:22 pm
amother OP wrote:
Ikr.


Translation? Is it :
I know, right ?
Can u not just type that out ?
shock
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amother
NeonOrange


 

Post Today at 2:48 am
I personally , am liking this story sofar!
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groisamomma




 
 
    
 

Post Today at 3:58 am
Whoever the author is, it looks like she lurks on imamother with the whole Give the Get airplane and discussion this week. No originality.
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amother
  OP


 

Post Today at 5:32 am
groisamomma wrote:
Whoever the author is, it looks like she lurks on imamother with the whole Give the Get airplane and discussion this week. No originality.


Yes! I wanted to mention that Friday when I read it.
Especially using a real as aguna from FG and the airplane.
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amother
DarkGreen  


 

Post Today at 7:32 am
does anyone else wonder if avigdor had a pxrn issue......
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Tao




 
 
    
 

Post Today at 7:34 am
amother NeonOrange wrote:
I personally , am liking this story sofar!


Same, I don't mind it! Main character (forget her name lol) sounds like a bit of a self-centred brat tho....hopefully she has a character redemption
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amother
Ginger


 

Post Today at 7:43 am
OP I am an avid reader of Ami and had to read it more than once to kinda understand what was going on. Is it a young writer or am I just not concentrating well.
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Perly1




 
 
    
 

Post Today at 8:00 am
I've not enjoyed it so far. It is a shame to have a character with, what seems at the moment, a shallow reason to divorce.
She was angry because he was following the election news on a kosher website in his lunchbreak. She seems to think she should be married to somebody on a higher level then her middos deserve.
More may come to light but that appears the extent of it at the moment. Her family and friends thought he was a good guy and his family were paying their rent rather than her father (except recently) as her family struggle financially (which can make it harder to find a good learner)
No mention yet of her having a job.
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amother
  DarkGreen


 

Post Today at 8:06 am
Perly1 wrote:
I've not enjoyed it so far. It is a shame to have a character with, what seems at the moment, a shallow reason to divorce.
She was angry because he was following the election news on a kosher website in his lunchbreak. She seems to think she should be married to somebody on a higher level then her middos deserve.
More may come to light but that appears the extent of it at the moment. Her family and friends thought he was a good guy and his family were paying their rent rather than her father (except recently) as her family struggle financially (which can make it harder to find a good learner)
No mention yet of her having a job.


I dont think it will end with just the kosher news site....and it was lots of hours....not just lunchbreak
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