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amother
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 Tue, Aug 23 2011, 2:40 pm
I watch the ocean in awe
I hear the roar of crashing waves
Rushing towards the shore
Climbing higher, rising forcefully
About to flood the land
And then at the last moment
As if pulled back by an invisible power
Meekly retreating to its place
All because it is Your will
And I know
That I too
Will overcome my nature
Will fight my inherent will
And at the last moment
I too
Will retreat
All because
It is Your will
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mirror
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Wed, Aug 24 2011, 1:07 am
Absolutely breathtaking!
Nice analogy!
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amother
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Tue, Aug 30 2011, 1:45 pm
thanks guys! glad u enjoyed
this was rejected by a mag so just wanted to try it out here...
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