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Does this Hebrew make sense (short note)?



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amother
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Post Mon, Jul 15 2024, 7:57 pm
Hi,

I would appreciate if someone could proofread this for me (it's for a child):

,לחברתי היקרה
!אני יתגעגע אליך מאוד מאוד.
,באהבה
אסתי

Also how to write 'keep in touch' correctly?

Thanks!
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amother
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Post Mon, Jul 15 2024, 8:09 pm
amother OP wrote:
Hi,

I would appreciate if someone could proofread this for me (it's for a child):

,לחברתי היקרה
!אני יתגעגע אליך מאוד מאוד.
,באהבה
אסתי

Also how to write 'keep in touch' correctly?

Thanks!

Just one edit change יתגעגע to אתגעגע
Otherwise perfect
You can drop the word ani if you want, it's fine to leave it in as well
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amother
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Post Mon, Jul 15 2024, 8:10 pm
(you should) keep in touch = שמרי על קשר
Let's keep in touch = בואי נשמור על קשר/מקווה לשמור על קשר
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amother
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Post Mon, Jul 15 2024, 9:59 pm
Thank you!!

Would this be used for the equivalent of KIT: שמרי על קשר

Like to write this at the end with a phone number after it?
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amother
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Post Tue, Jul 16 2024, 7:14 am
amother OP wrote:
Thank you!!

Would this be used for the equivalent of KIT: שמרי על קשר

Like to write this at the end with a phone number after it?


Anyone?
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Bnei Berak 10




 
 
    
 

Post Tue, Jul 16 2024, 8:04 am
amother OP wrote:
Thank you!!

Would this be used for the equivalent of KIT: שמרי על קשר

Like to write this at the end with a phone number after it?

I would also add email address. Not every phone has messaging.
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amother
Cinnamon


 

Post Tue, Jul 16 2024, 8:44 am
amother OP wrote:
Hi,

I would appreciate if someone could proofread this for me (it's for a child):

,לחברתי היקרה
!אני יתגעגע אליך מאוד מאוד.
,באהבה
אסתי

Also how to write 'keep in touch' correctly?

Thanks!


אליך is to a boy
אלייך is to a girl
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salt




 
 
    
 

Post Wed, Jul 17 2024, 1:37 am
Bnei Berak 10 wrote:
I would also add email address. Not every phone has messaging.


Keeping in touch can also be calling.
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amother
  Seablue


 

Post Wed, Jul 17 2024, 5:17 am
amother Cinnamon wrote:
אליך is to a boy
אלייך is to a girl

The way it's written is perfectly fine
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