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greenfire ↓

Thu, Jun 13 2013, 4:26 pm

Facade of Love

don't love me today
because it's my birthday
don't love me tomorrow
because I am dead

my bed is cold & damp & stiff
cannot breath because there is no air
my body wonders why
it can no longer feel the pain

I needed the love
each day before then
if only someone would have known
the power a hug could have shown

don't make me a yummy cake
or buy any FUN balloons
purple pink yellow green
the flowers have lost all meaning

I see the sky & feel the grass
but is this where I want to be
my life is spinning round & round
NO please don't put me in the ground

there's blood in my veins
& tears in my eyes
don't bother to look for it will already be too late
as the earth covers my body

I feel no love
I feel no life
& my soul hides at the gates of fire
death appears to be the winner

©2010

myself

Thu, Jun 13 2013, 4:31 pm

You write really well! Have you considered publishing or perhaps writing a blog?

the world's best mom

Thu, Jun 13 2013, 6:54 pm

greenfire wrote:

if only someone would have known
the power a hug could have shown

Hope it's not too late: Hug

Was this poem published somewhere? I see it's copyrighted. If not then it should be.

robynm

Fri, Jun 14 2013, 10:14 am

Totally agree. Book worthy or at least a blog!!

If I was a huggy person, I'd totally give you one. Stay strong!

JMM-uc

Sun, Dec 21 2014, 2:35 pm

This made me sad Teary Eyed

. BTW You're super talented.

nanny24/7

Tue, Feb 24 2015, 8:46 pm

I love this poem, I especially love the hug part - this is a true work of art!
I've never met a exceptionally gifted artist, who knew no pain.
so Hugs to you, your poem, and your past.

↑ greenfire

Tue, Feb 24 2015, 9:06 pm

nanny24/7 wrote:

I love this poem, I especially love the hug part - this is a true work of art!
I've never met a exceptionally gifted artist, who knew no pain.
so Hugs to you, your poem, and your past.

wow ~ thanx

[how ironic to be reading this close to my birthday]

Last edited by greenfire on Wed, Feb 25 2015, 1:23 pm; edited 1 time in total

loveandpeace

Tue, Feb 24 2015, 9:38 pm

Huggggggg

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