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 Thu, Mar 24 2011, 11:47 am
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sunshine!
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Thu, Mar 24 2011, 3:19 pm
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40 views and no comments? Oh well, I thought it was good.
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robynm
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Thu, Mar 24 2011, 3:24 pm
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sunshine, I'll admit that I opened it. but it looked too intense and I have to read it later after I leave work so im sorry. please dont base ur worth on whether or not ppl respond. its happened to me. I know it sucks. u should be proud of ur work!
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mommee
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Thu, Mar 24 2011, 5:09 pm
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wow. that was written very well. the poetry complete with the metaphors and the rhyming... it was a very smooth read and very meaningful too.
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the world's best mom
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Thu, Mar 24 2011, 6:28 pm
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Sunshine, that poem is amazing! It's a great way to see a life, especially when it seems to end too early. You make me want to post the poem I wrote about my nephew, but I'm trying to get it published so I don't want to post it here.
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sequoia
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Thu, Mar 24 2011, 6:39 pm
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Very nice!!! It reminds me of Whitman's "O captain my captain" and Tennyson's "Crossing the bar."
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S.Shcwartz
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Thu, Mar 24 2011, 6:44 pm
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Wow, you write with talent.
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cuties' mom
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Thu, Mar 24 2011, 8:43 pm
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I miss your writing. Haven't seen any of it for a while. Then again, I'm rarely online these days, but its great! It does remind me of Captain oh captain.
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Thu, Mar 24 2011, 11:02 pm
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Funny, I never even heard of "Oh Captain, my captain" until I just googled it. I wrote this poem the night she was niftar, we were all feeling so empty and sad and the inspiration struck. I gave it to her family at the shiva.
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