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mimismile
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 Thu, Mar 24 2011, 2:37 pm
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im crying! these poems are just so true! thank you all!
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robynm
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Thu, Mar 24 2011, 8:01 pm
cherish me
hold me
understand me
care
value me
hug me
accept me
care
believe in me
surround me
appreciate me
care
support me
touch me
respect me
care
please I beg of you.
I need you.
care.
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amother
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Thu, Mar 24 2011, 8:34 pm
| robynm wrote: | cherish me
hold me
understand me
care
value me
hug me
accept me
care
believe in me
surround me
appreciate me
care
support me
touch me
respect me
care
please I beg of you.
I need you.
care. |
You said it sista.
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amother
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Fri, Mar 25 2011, 5:03 am
| robynm wrote: | cherish me
hold me
understand me
care
value me
hug me
accept me
care
believe in me
surround me
appreciate me
care
support me
touch me
respect me
care
please I beg of you.
I need you.
care. |
oh yeah. sweet and to the point.
-Debra
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amother
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Mon, Mar 28 2011, 2:19 pm
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Being in a relationship with 'pain'.. isn't that too abstract? Like over-dramatized?
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robynm
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Mon, Mar 28 2011, 2:23 pm
| amother wrote: | | Being in a relationship with 'pain'.. isn't that too abstract? Like over-dramatized? |
what is that supposed to mean??
write what ur version is....
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amother
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Mon, Mar 28 2011, 2:24 pm
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Relationships are with people, not 'things'.....
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robynm
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Mon, Mar 28 2011, 4:01 pm
| amother wrote: | | Relationships are with people, not 'things'..... |
ok I dont even know how to respond to this.... but SERIOUSLY????
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amother
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Mon, Mar 28 2011, 6:15 pm
Pain is my partner, too, Robyn. We're in a long-term relationship right now.
Try this one. I'm not a great writer of poetry, but this is dedicated to my ex:
To the Love of My Life:
I love you,
I hate you.
You left me
And you moved on.
You found new love,
But I'm still here -
Alone with my pain
And myself.
Long, lonely nights
With my hopes, my memories,
My pain, my tears,
And myself.
"Love of my life"?
No more.
There is only me
And myself.
Your love crushed my self,
Like a moth
Burned in the flames
Of your very intense self.
Thank you for leaving.
For now I exist.
My pain helped me find
Myself.
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robynm
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Mon, Mar 28 2011, 8:46 pm
| amother wrote: | Pain is my partner, too, Robyn. We're in a long-term relationship right now.
Try this one. I'm not a great writer of poetry, but this is dedicated to my ex:
To the Love of My Life:
I love you,
I hate you.
You left me
And you moved on.
You found new love,
But I'm still here -
Alone with my pain
And myself.
Long, lonely nights
With my hopes, my memories,
My pain, my tears,
And myself.
"Love of my life"?
No more.
There is only me
And myself.
Your love crushed my self,
Like a moth
Burned in the flames
Of your very intense self.
Thank you for leaving.
For now I exist.
My pain helped me find
Myself. |
excellent!!! I approve!! not that u need my approval.... just inspires me to write more
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robynm
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Mon, Mar 28 2011, 9:00 pm
I love you
no I dont
ive let go
not really
ive forgotten
nothing
and now
you haunt my dreams
you wont leave
leave me alone
get out of my head
im not yours
so I stay awake
no dreaming
you cant haunt me
its not real
lets me be
I need to breathe
I love you
no I dont
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amother
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Tue, Mar 29 2011, 5:50 am
Robyn! I loved this one. It's great!
-Debra
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