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amother

Wed, Mar 23 2011, 11:48 pm

robynm wrote:

amother wrote:

I couldn't, I lied.

Not true.

I missed him.
I wished he
Would know.

It was over.
I was breaking.
I broke.

Now only me.

I lie in the dark,
Waiting, wanting.

He is no longer here.

Only me.
Alone.

Does he know?
Does he miss me?
Doesn't matter.

It's over.
Finnished.
Gone.

my god amother
im reading this and I want to cry out in pain
I could have written this....

I would ask u to explain... but the amother fact gives me the feeling that u wouldnt want to explain

any chance you would pm me?

You know me Robyn, I'll PM you.

Signed,
Your friendly anonymous writer friend.

robynm

Wed, Mar 23 2011, 11:48 pm

amother wrote:

A relationship,
So intense.

And yet,
'Twas doomed.

Physical pleasure,
Could not,
Would not,
Sustain us two.

He left,
I mourned.

I mourned,
As I had,
Every two,
Weeks.

For a physical relationship,
Is no relationship.

To connect
Means more
Than just the thrill
Of lovers.

It means,
To love,
When in the daylight,
Without the covers.

To have him give,
Without the touch.

Was the one thing
She could not go on without.

So when he left,
She mourned,
She cried,
And yes she knew that it was good.

im speechless. I wish I could steal this and say I wrote this myself.
beautifully written and emotionally filled
im sorry for the pain uve been through

amother

Thu, Mar 24 2011, 12:11 am

You told me,
I was the only one.

The last one.

I thought I was,
I thought we'd be,
Forever.

How I've cried!
Do you hear my pain?!
This will be with me forever!

I lay awake,
Alone at night,
Are you?

Have you moved on?

Do you know how long it took me,
To move past the ones you'd told me of,
Before?

No,
I know you're lost,
Our family is lost.

I miss you,
But you're gone.

And yet my anger!
My pain!
My vengance,
For what you've done!

I wish that it, would leave me.

For it's not all you.
I know you hurt as well.
And yet, we cannot come back together.

So just tell me,
Just whisper in the wind,
That I mattered.

Tell me,
That while I was,
I was the only one,
You'd ever wanted.

You told me I was beautiful.
You told me I was yours.
You told me we would build something.
Something worth more than before.

You tried.
You toiled.
You worked.
And then you just gave in.

Was it me?
Was it you?
Or was it from Above?

And yet,
In turning from you,
I've turned from Him.

The only intimate relationship,
That I now should have.

I want it,
I yearn for it,
And yet I can't,
I broke.

So tell me Dear,
My sweet,
My love,
Although they say you are no more.

Did you love me?
Were we one?
Or merely you and I?

Dear G-d!
I ask You now,
Can I come back to You again?

I lay,
I cry,
I wonder what ever will be?

Intimacy,
In the physical sense,
In yet an expression of a higher call.

And yet,
I'm burned,
I can't explain,
And that's the worst of all.

I write my life,
My fears,
My dreams,
So many here will read.

And yet,
I know,
That while I need to build with Him,
I wish to know what was of us.

Of you, and me.

And of me, and You, Hashem?

amother

Thu, Mar 24 2011, 12:13 am

amother wrote:

Wow, thank you OP for opening this thread. I've carried this around too long.

robynm

Thu, Mar 24 2011, 12:15 am

im crying...

robynm

Thu, Mar 24 2011, 12:16 am

amother wrote:

Wow, thank you OP for opening this thread. I've carried this around too long.

keep them coming
theyre beautiful!
PM me pretty please!!!!

Bliss

Thu, Mar 24 2011, 12:55 am

Wow, these poems are beautiful and touching. I can't write well but I love reading them, they are all loaded with emotions.

Last edited by Bliss on Thu, Mar 24 2011, 1:14 am; edited 1 time in total

havefaith

Thu, Mar 24 2011, 1:10 am

what? its too scary!

amother

Thu, Mar 24 2011, 3:14 am

Op here, let's call me Debra. I'm happy to see more 'amothers' writing their own painful experiences and they are beautiful. But my original poem was about my relationship with pain. Not a relationship with a person. I only wrote the first poem.

amother

Thu, Mar 24 2011, 5:23 am

Wow! these poems are incredible and touch the heart. I wish I knew how to write like that! Very powerful messages.

eshes chayil

Thu, Mar 24 2011, 5:28 am

thank you so much for posting these poems. Each of them is so beautiful. and raw. and touching.

amother

Thu, Mar 24 2011, 6:12 am

To the amother who wrote about her lack of relationship with G-d, I so get that. When we're missing a good solid relationship, our love to G-d gets challenged too. I'm in the same place now.

-Debra

the world's best mom

Thu, Mar 24 2011, 7:30 am

Wow!!! These poems are amazing!! They can really help people understand what divorcees go through.

amother

Thu, Mar 24 2011, 10:17 am

I think anyone going through a hard time can relate. Especially those with relationship issues.

-Debra

robynm

Thu, Mar 24 2011, 11:47 am

amother wrote:

I'm in
an intimate
relationship
right now.

It's deep.
It's incredible.
It's intense.

It engulfs me
Overwhelms me
Terrifies me.

There's no
way out
of this
relationship.

It holds
me captive.
Doesn't
let go.
Drives
me insane.

My intimate
relationship
with
PAIN
is too close
for comfort.

It is
suffocating.
It is
agonizing.
It is
core
slashing.

I'm way
too deep
into the
relationship
to
withdraw
to stand
up
for myself.

I'm held
captive
within
me.

Debra,
Your poem is so real and deep. and I know you wrote about pain. What's scary about this is that you can't escape. In an intimate relationship with another person, you can sorta escape (sorry ladies, speaking from my divorced mind) but this pain you speak about. this depression, if I am allowed to call it that. is all encompassing. it is a part of u. it is u. I get it. I understand. its something that u have to live w. more intimate than anything.
thank you for saring!
Robyn

amother

Thu, Mar 24 2011, 12:09 pm

You're right robyn, it's something I have to live with right now, but in releasing it, and sharing it, which I have never done in the past, it may heal me. Then, I can look at it from a distance.

-Debra

robynm

Thu, Mar 24 2011, 12:17 pm

well im glad u are able to at least write about it. I do that too. I find that writing is one of the best releases. there are no limits!!

chilled

Thu, Mar 24 2011, 12:58 pm

robynm wrote:

intimate relationship

was it just physical
was it just emotional

was it ever
was it ever

was I anything
was I something

was I me
was I real

where were you
where are you

pain
alone
neglect
silence
anger
avoid
ignore

a tear

and now so much space
no one to appease
not a soul in the way
alone in my space

searching
calm
peace
free
dream
breathe

still a tear

hey there... beautiful...

robynm

Thu, Mar 24 2011, 1:06 pm

thanks chilled 8)
u calling me beautiful or what I wrote Wink

now lets see urs....

amother

Thu, Mar 24 2011, 2:11 pm

robynm wrote:

well im glad u are able to at least write about it. I do that too. I find that writing is one of the best releases. there are no limits!!

-Debra

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