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e1234
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 Fri, Dec 12 2008, 3:03 am
For all you creative people out there - this is the first time I'm really using payed advertising and advertising in a magazine - Now I hate writing - can you help me write this in a good and catchy way--
here's what I want to try to say (all ideas are welcome) (this is for 1/4 of a page ad)
Professional High Quality Websites at a Reasonable cost.
Custom Website Design and Programmed - No limit to what we can do. You dream - we design & program
your dreams.
All your web needs - Website Design, Website Programming, Hosting.
To help organize your business we also create custom database solutions!
Everything you need for your website at one address - www.awebforyou.com (or simply awb4.com)
We outsource to Israel - Same quality work but you save the money.
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sunspot
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Fri, Dec 12 2008, 8:48 am
I think before you advertise, you should redesign your website to a more sleeker design--if you have no time--you could buy a template off template monster and customize it. You want to present a sleek up to date look to the world. after all this is their first impression.
Sorry don't mean to offend you--just a tip since I am in this business too
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poemmom
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Fri, Dec 12 2008, 9:44 am
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As a graphic designer, I think good design should speak for itself. You don't need to be so wordy since most of that stuff is obvious. Why not make your ad actually look like a more streamlined (because its smaller and can't hold as much detail) version of your improved website, with minimal text. A graphically beautiful design, that looks like a web page, simply stating your company name, service and contact info, will look more professional. Over-selling the obvious has an amateur ring for me. Good luck!!!
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ruth
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Wed, Dec 31 2008, 3:44 am
I would avoid the word "dream" and replace it with "vision"
hatzlaha
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e1234
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Thu, Jan 01 2009, 7:29 am
thanks - here's what my ad looked like in the end.
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sky
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Thu, Jan 01 2009, 7:40 am
It looks great.
Hatzlacha.
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