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Help Writing a Poem

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amother

OP ↓

Mon, Oct 30 2023, 11:42 pm

Is there somewhere I can get help writing a poem for a kallah gift?

amother

DarkRed ↓

Mon, Oct 30 2023, 11:47 pm

If you write the content of what you want to say, I'm sure a lot of women here would be happy to help.

amother

↑ OP ↓

Tue, Oct 31 2023, 12:15 am

I’m giving her a watch along with a countdown that is a puzzle and she’ll get one piece each day until the wedding

amother

↑ DarkRed

Tue, Oct 31 2023, 1:00 am

I can hardly believe it
A dream's coming true!
Each day that passes
I'm excited anew!

The happy date's circled
We're all busy getting
All details ready
For an incredible wedding!

If I am so thrilled
You must be over the moon
Eagerly awaiting
The event coming soon!

You're on the tip of your seat
You're watching the clock
You're counting the days left
To a wedding geshmak!

To make this wait easier
To ease this tough time
Enjoy this pretty watch
(And this silly rhyme...)

And to keep you busy
Till that wondrous date
Here's a puzzle piece
To ease this tough wait.

Put it in a safe spot
Because each day when you arise
You'll get another puzzle piece
To assemble a surprise.

Don't be puzzled at this gift
I'm enjoying it too
Because I'm just overjoyed
To be celebrating with you!

amother

Pansy

Tue, Oct 31 2023, 1:26 am

Beautiful amazing poem to the point

amother

↑ OP

Wed, Nov 01 2023, 4:35 pm

Anyone else in the mood of trying?
Thanks
And thanks to the imamother that wrote this one. It’s very good just looking for something a little different but not even sure what Can't Believe It

amother

Begonia

Wed, Nov 01 2023, 4:49 pm

Time is a-passing, the day's coming near
Excitement and happiness filling the air.
The minutes tick down to that wonderful day
When Mrs. _______ is what we will say!
Every pot has its lid, each glove has its pair
And now you too have found your bashert
Each piece of the puzzle is coming together
In Hashem's Master plan that was planned since forever.
With the puzzle complete, your neshama will be whole
Mazel tov on your bayis neeman byisroel!

Serena1

Wed, Nov 01 2023, 5:07 pm

As the time draws near
Much joy we do hear
It's a countdown to the date
When you join your soulmate!

Our חתן is filled with laughter
May you both be happy ever after
And may every second of your life
Be blessed and free of strife!

Please each puzzle piece do take
So that a picture you can make
And may the home you're zoche to build
With every blessing always be filled!

amother

NeonYellow

Wed, Nov 01 2023, 5:59 pm

Dear Kallah,

Though a watch can't speak
There's so much it can say
לַכֹּ֖ל זְמָ֑ן וְעֵ֥ת
There's a time, there's a place
Every hour every day.
עֵ֣ת לָטַ֔עַת
You're now planting your roots,
וְעֵ֥ת לִבְנֽוֹת
You're building a home, offshoots,'
עֵ֤ת לִבְכּוֹת֙ וְעֵ֣ת לִשְׂח֔וֹק
Your wedding day,
A time to cry and pray,
And then laugh and dance away!
עֵ֣ת לִתְפּ֔וֹר
There'll be things to sew and mend,
עֵ֤ת לֶֽאֱהֹב֙
But your love will always transcend!

Time's like a puzzle,
Some moments are smooth,
Like the sides,
Some minutes are rough,
Confusing,
Like the insides,
Sometimes things are confusing,
And seconds later they're amusing.
But at the end when the puzzle solved,
And all those issues are resolved
The pieces fall into place
לַכֹּ֖ל זְמָ֑ן וְעֵ֥ת!

Mazel Tov!!

mfb

Wed, Nov 01 2023, 9:10 pm

Thanks so much to all those that took time to help.
I will probably take lines from each one to put it together until it feels right to me.
I really appreciate everyone helping out

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