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greenfire




 
 
    
 

Post Thu, Jun 13 2013, 1:26 pm
Facade of Love

don't love me today
because it's my birthday
don't love me tomorrow
because I am dead
 
my bed is cold & damp & stiff
cannot breath because there is no air
my body wonders why
it can no longer feel the pain
 
I needed the love
each day before then
if only someone would have known
the power a hug could have shown
 
don't make me a yummy cake
or buy any FUN balloons
purple pink yellow green
the flowers have lost all meaning
 
I see the sky & feel the grass
but is this where I want to be
my life is spinning round & round
NO please don't put me in the ground
 
there's blood in my veins
& tears in my eyes
don't bother to look for it will already be too late
as the earth covers my body
 
I feel no love
I feel no life
& my soul hides at the gates of fire
death appears to be the winner


©2010
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myself




 
 
    
 

Post Thu, Jun 13 2013, 1:31 pm
Crying Hug Hug You write really well! Have you considered publishing or perhaps writing a blog?
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the world's best mom




 
 
    
 

Post Thu, Jun 13 2013, 3:54 pm
greenfire wrote:

if only someone would have known
the power a hug could have shown
 

Hope it's not too late: Hug Hug Hug Hug

Was this poem published somewhere? I see it's copyrighted. If not then it should be.
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robynm




 
 
    
 

Post Fri, Jun 14 2013, 7:14 am
Totally agree. Book worthy or at least a blog!!

If I was a huggy person, I'd totally give you one. Stay strong!
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JMM-uc




 
 
    
 

Post Sun, Dec 21 2014, 11:35 am
This made me sad Teary Eyed. BTW You're super talented.
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nanny24/7




 
 
    
 

Post Tue, Feb 24 2015, 5:46 pm
I love this poem, I especially love the hug part - this is a true work of art!
I've never met a exceptionally gifted artist, who knew no pain.
so Hugs to you, your poem, and your past.
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greenfire




 
 
    
 

Post Tue, Feb 24 2015, 6:06 pm
nanny24/7 wrote:
I love this poem, I especially love the hug part - this is a true work of art!
I've never met a exceptionally gifted artist, who knew no pain.
so Hugs to you, your poem, and your past.


wow ~ thanx

[how ironic to be reading this close to my birthday]


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loveandpeace




 
 
    
 

Post Tue, Feb 24 2015, 6:38 pm
Huggggggg
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