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PostPosted: Tue, Jun 19 2012, 10:37 am    Post subject: Motzei Shabbos
 
The city lights reflect on clouds above
My quiet suburb garden in the night
I once was in that glow, partaking of
Adventures offered freely in the light
But now my Motzei Shabbos silent stays
A precious infant finally goes to sleep
The peace is valued though I long for days
When more came from Havdalah than this deep
Abiding thought that I must halt my life
And all that’s left belongs to my sweet son
At long last I’m a mother and a wife
But still the carefree girl I was is gone
If I could change my life, I’d stay the same
But lights in clouds above still call my name.
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PostPosted: Sun, Jun 24 2012, 3:41 pm    Post subject: re: Motzei Shabbos
 
love it
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PostPosted: Sun, Jun 24 2012, 7:20 pm    Post subject: re: Motzei Shabbos
 
Wow

You expressed those feelings so perfectly.

IKWYM!
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PostPosted: Thu, Jul 05 2012, 7:48 am    Post subject: re: Motzei Shabbos
 
Oh so good.

The ending is Shakespearean.
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PostPosted: Thu, Jul 05 2012, 12:07 pm    Post subject: re: Motzei Shabbos
 
I was trying to make the whole thing a Shakespearean sonnet, but my grasp of iambic pentameter isn't amazing.
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