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Wait—that song sounded strangely unforgettable! And that girl! She knew her—one way or another, but how?!
elf--you are GOOD at spotting these things! Wow! Well, I triple checked all mine and I'm pretty sure there's no wronge letters...I hope! Good job, you'd be an awesome proofreader
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| Posted: Sun, Jul 18 2010, 8:13 pm Post subject: Re: re: Tell a story with no "C", "M" or |
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| Atali wrote: | Oops,
I tried to avoid the letters but didn't do the worlds greatest job.
Let's change "ocean" to "sea" and "lock" to "lid" |
Sorry to nitpick, but now it's "....a broken lid on the lid?"
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| Posted: Sun, Jul 18 2010, 8:13 pm Post subject: Re: re: Tell a story with no "C", "M" or |
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| Shopmiami49 wrote: | | But she realized that she first had to give a tenth of the treasure to tzadakah. |
Lol that made me laugh 
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| Posted: Sun, Jul 18 2010, 8:14 pm Post subject: Re: re: Tell a story with no "C", "M" or |
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| elf123 wrote: | | Atali wrote: | Oops,
I tried to avoid the letters but didn't do the worlds greatest job.
Let's change "ocean" to "sea" and "lock" to "lid" |
Sorry to nitpick, but now it's "....a broken lid on the lid?" |
how about "a brokwn dead bolt on the lid?" lol does that make sense at all?
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| Posted: Sun, Jul 18 2010, 8:15 pm Post subject: Re: !! |
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| crush wrote: | Wait—that song sounded strangely unforgettable! And that girl! She knew her—one way or another, but how?!
elf--you are GOOD at spotting these things! Wow! Well, I triple checked all mine and I'm pretty sure there's no wronge letters...I hope! Good job, you'd be an awesome proofreader |
 Why, thank you, kind sir.... (Guess what I do professionally? Oh, wait, you already did!)
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| Posted: Sun, Jul 18 2010, 8:16 pm Post subject: Re: !! |
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| elf123 wrote: | | crush wrote: | Wait—that song sounded strangely unforgettable! And that girl! She knew her—one way or another, but how?!
elf--you are GOOD at spotting these things! Wow! Well, I triple checked all mine and I'm pretty sure there's no wronge letters...I hope! Good job, you'd be an awesome proofreader |
Why, thank you, kind sir.... (Guess what I do professionally? Oh, wait, you already did!) |
No way! Really?! That's so cool  and now I'm emabarressed, cuz I noticed I spelled wrong "wronge" by mistake, and you for sure noticed that!
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| Posted: Sun, Jul 18 2010, 8:58 pm Post subject: re: Tell a story with no "C", "M" or &qu |
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| Lol!!!!
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| Posted: Sun, Jul 18 2010, 9:09 pm Post subject: re: Tell a story with no "C", "M" or &qu |
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Happy you guys are keeping yourself entertained.... 
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| Posted: Sun, Jul 18 2010, 9:32 pm Post subject: re: Tell a story with no "C", "M" or &qu |
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| Then arrived a great big alligator and ate laylay. How sad.
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| Posted: Sun, Jul 18 2010, 9:33 pm Post subject: re: Tell a story with no "C", "M" or &qu |
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| What a party pooper. How sad
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| Posted: Sun, Jul 18 2010, 9:42 pm Post subject: Re: re: Tell a story with no "C", "M" or |
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| cleanlinen wrote: | | What a party pooper. How sad |
don't use P, that's part of the game. 
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| Posted: Sun, Jul 18 2010, 9:45 pm Post subject: re: Tell a story with no "C", "M" or &qu |
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We assumed the game was over, unless laylay is gonna pull a little red riding hood.
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| Posted: Sun, Jul 18 2010, 9:50 pm Post subject: Re: re: Tell a story with no "C", "M" or |
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| elf123 wrote: | | Atali wrote: | | It was a small treasure box with a broken lock on the lid. |
Sorry, that third bold letter looks suspiciously like a "c" to me! |
with all the proofreading, how did nobody notice the "m" in small?
that's before the c in lock.
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| Posted: Sun, Jul 18 2010, 9:53 pm Post subject: Re: re: Tell a story with no "C", "M" or |
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| marina wrote: | | Then arrived a great big alligator and ate laylay. How sad. |
Well, then the alligator gently took Laylay out of his throat! Yay! And Laylay started to look for her treasure again.
I like this game! I don't want it to end, it's such fun
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| cleanlinen wrote: | | As she got more near, thats when she saw it |
and the "m" in more?
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| Posted: Sun, Jul 18 2010, 9:54 pm Post subject: re: Tell a story with no "C", "M" or &qu |
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OY, IT IS NEVER OVER, THERE IS ALWAYS ANOTHER WAY!
Laylay davened to the Aibishter who suggested to the alligator that he throw her out on the land of Ninveh.
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Lol, Marina, you make me laugh. But I'm continuing it, yay!
Then Laylay saw Yonah! “Oh, Yonah, tell this girl, if you will, the laws of the land”, she begged.
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| Posted: Sun, Jul 18 2010, 10:02 pm Post subject: re: Tell a story with no "C", "M" or &qu |
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| "Firstly, dry yourself. Here's a towel."
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| Posted: Sun, Jul 18 2010, 10:16 pm Post subject: re: Tell a story with no "C", "M" or &qu |
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| So Laylay dried herself, wringing her hair so hard that a few strands of hair tore out.
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| A bird grabbed the floating hairs to add to her nest, high in a tree.
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