I need help with a short poem for Purim

I know so many of you here are so talented and I was wondering if you can PLEASE help me with a short poem (6-8 lines only.)
I am sending sholach-manos to my clients and I want to thank them for giving me business and say Happy Purim.TIA

Executive Member Joined: Aug 02 2006 Posts: 334

I want to you use this ocasion
to express my apreciation
for all the things you do for us
without making any fuss
your greatly apreciated please know
sometimes its hard to show how
so take this token as a gift this time
and this is how I will conclude this rhyme

Thanx Finkel-beautiful! any more ideas please?

Silver Member Joined: Oct 01 2006 Posts: 927

what type of clients?

Women's accessories shops.

What I have found, is it's hard to make up poems, when you really don't know who or what it's going for. What type of people? how close you are to them??? Hey, I tried, and if you want I
ll try again:) A'Freilichin Purim

Just wanted to thank you for patronizing me
On a Purim day like this I am happy with glee
It means a lot to me, for my cutomers so true
To have ones that share in things that I do

Silver Member Joined: Jan 31 2006 Posts: 633

posten ANON by mistake!!!! The last post was mine.

Platinum Member Joined: Jan 17 2005 Posts: 5505

thanks 4 ur business
I love cash
now ive got urs
I must dash

off 2 bloomies
my favourite store
hope ull soon b back
2 give me more Twisted Evil

Platinum Member Joined: Jan 17 2005 Posts: 5505

it crossed my mind
I COULD b rich
but I do it free
cos im a silly b****!!! Laughing

Platinum Member Joined: Jan 17 2005 Posts: 5505

its a pleasure doing business
w a client such as u
and now that weve reached purim
I know just what I should do...

mishloach manot is a way to
say that I appreciate
the way we work 2gether
so enjoy - and celebrate!!!

Moderator Joined: Nov 20 2005 Posts: 4868

If it�s a cosmetic/accessories place, maybe put in a mini perfume sample and you could use part of this.

All year long I extend my services to you
I try my best to please, and offer something new
I attempt to accommodate your needs and your every changing style
It�s my goal to personalize your care � so you�re not just another file

Now that Purim�s here, I�ve sat down to reflect
My clients, my customers, the those who�s cash I collect
I appreciate your business and the fact that you come to me
In a world of competition � I �scents� your loyalty

Platinum Member Joined: Jan 17 2005 Posts: 5505

I c ive got serious competition - I like that!!! Very Happy